Question

16．学习和生活中的烦恼都会使学生产生压力，有的压力来自于父母，有的来自于老师或同学，请以Less pressure，better life"为题，结合自身实际，谈一谈你的压力是什么以及你通常是如何缓解压力，放松自己的．
要求：书写工整，时态正确，语言通顺，不少于80字．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Sometimes I can't get good grades in the exams，although I work hard有时候我考试不能取得好成绩，虽然我很努力．
although引导的让步状语从句．不能与so连用．
【高分句型二】
I know ①②if I want to be successful in the future．I have to face the challenges我知道如果将来我想要成功，我需要面对挑战．
①know后是省略that的宾语从句．
②if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 Less pressure，better life
In our daily life，we always have a lot of pressure，especially to me，a student in Grade Nine．For example：I have to stay up late doing too much homework every day．And my mother also asks me to have lessons on weekends．Sometimes I can't get good grades in the exams，although I work hard．【高分句型一】All of these can make me feel stressed out．（我的压力）
I know if I want to be successful in the future．I have to face the challenges．【高分句型二】So I often smile to everything to reduce the pressure．In my spacetime，I listen to the music that I can dance to，because it can make merelaxed．I also go to a movie with my friends on Saturday evening．I chat online once a week．Doing sports is another way to relax myself．（如何减轻压力）
In a word，we can do lots of things to reduce the pressure and make our life more and more beautiful．

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