Question

随着地铁的投入使用，乘坐地铁出行已经成为人们生活中必不可少的出行方式。请你就乘坐地铁出行的利和弊，谈论自己对地铁出行的看法和态度。

要点：1．根据表格提示，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、100字左右的短文。

      2．文章的开头与结尾已给出，不计人所完成的文章中。

      3．请不要出现你的校名和姓名。

The underground train is playing amore and more important role in our daily life.

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When I go downtown, the underground train will be the first choice.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

The underground train is playing amore and more important role in our daily life. People can take underground train to go to most places in the city. It’s very convenient. Taking the underground train is good for the environment and it helps save energy. What interests people most is that it’s very fast. You don’t need to worry about staying for long on the way.

However, it has some disadvantages. Usually there are too many people on the train and it’s really crowded. Because of it, something may be easily stolen. Sometimes people talk loudly and it’s very noisy. All these make people uncomfortable.

I think it is a good way to travel if we take the underground train. It’s much safer than the bus, and cheaper than the taxi.

When I go downtown, the underground train will be the first choice.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求学生根据要点提示写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑、100字左右的短文。时态以一般现在时为主。体裁以议论文为主，可以发表自己的观点。

【亮点说明】作者在写作中以通过与乘火车、乘公交车作比较来说明乘坐地铁出行的利和弊，条理清晰，段落分明。恰当使用了一些复合句如What interests people most is that it’s very fast.、I think it is a good way to travel if we take the underground train.等等为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。