Question

书面表达。（8分）
请你以David的身份给Mary写一封信, 介绍你自己和你家人的情况。你可以谈谈他们的工作和他们所喜欢的食品。信的开头和末尾已经给出。你需要用下面的提示词: family, sister, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, hamburgers, vegetables。要求60词左右。
Dear Mary,
I’m David.I’m from England.________________________________________
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Yours,  
David  

Answer 1

Dear Mary，
I’m David. I’m from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They’re my mother, my father, my sister and I. my father is an English teacher. He likes fish very much. My mother is a doctor. She likes cooking. Chicken is her favourite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat vegetables. They are good for us. Look! We have a happy family.

解析试题分析：本书面表达，实际上就是用书信的形式用第一人称写自己的个人情况，当然书信格式已经给出，其中一定要包含材料中所涉及到的内容，要用简单的明了的句型结构来表达，比如可以用I’m Jackie，I’m 12 years old. My mother is ….等。
考点：应用文写作
点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的应用，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。