Question

【题目】请以An Accident 为题写一篇短文，包含以下词汇：one day, when, try to., though(虽然)。80词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】

One sunny afternoon, when I was riding home, I heard “Help! Help!”. I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. The boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home. “Thank you very much!” the boy’s parents said when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，题目中有关于J我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达，这一点很好。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。