Question

【题目】书面表达

下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。

Dear Tom，

My classmate，Lucy，bought a new pen.I liked it very much，so I used it without her permission.Unluckily，I broke it.Then I put it back secretly.Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me.I don't know what to do.Can you help me?

Yours，

Daming

请你以Tom的身份，给他写一封80～100词的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Daming，

I know your problem. You've made two mistakes.First, you used your classmate's pen without her permission.Second, when you broke the pen, you didn't tell her the truth.Yes, you must tell her immediately.If you tell her the truth, perhaps she'll still be angry with you, but at least you'll prove you are honest.Then I think you should offer to pay.You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her.She will realize that you're truly sorry.

I hope the advice can help you.I'm sure you will make up with her soon.

Yours，

Tom

【解析】

题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。根据来信可知大明的烦恼是未经允许使用了同学的笔，而且弄坏了，他偷偷地还给了同学，同学发现了非常生气。根据大明的信首先要指出他的问题（错误）：不应该未经允许就使用他人的笔，要讲真话，承认自己的错误，然后给出他建议。在给出建议时可以采用you should…;you must…; you can…; I think you can 等句式。