Question

2．你校英语社团正在开展主题为"What should a good teacher be like？"的讨论，为此你来访了一些学生和家长，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并阐述你的观点．

Students'opinions	Parents'opinions	Your opinion
get on well with students give active and lively classes	have plenty of knowledge be strict with students	…

注意：（1）文章必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条，不能重复表中观点；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数．
短文首句：Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
               What should a good teacher be like？
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是阐述What should a good teacher be like的讨论结果，以及自己的观点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．学生的观点：和学生相处的好，积极生动的课堂
2．家长的观点：知识渊博，对学生严格
3．我的观点（至少两条）
常用到的重点短语：
go along with sb：与某人相处
be supposed to  应该
make…adj  让…怎样
what's more 再者
be strict with sb：对某人严格
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．And they①are supposed to ②try to ③make their classes lively and active④so that students can learn better with great interest．
①be supposed to  应该，后加动词原形．
②try to do sth 尽力做某事
③make…adj  让…怎样，make的用法．
④so that引导的目的状语从句．
2．①In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those ②who ③have difficulties in learning．
①in one's opinion：依某人看来，作为插入语．
②who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的先行词those．
③have difficulties in doing sth：做某事有困难．
3．①Anyway，they ②are expected to③help their students learn ④how to learn well．
①anyway"无论如何"，常放句首．
②一般现在时的被动语态am/is/are+过去分词，主语they是expect的承受者，构成被动关系，故用被动语态．
③help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
④疑问词+to do 作为learn的宾语．

解答 What should a good teacher be like？Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．【高分句型】（学生的观点：和学生相处的好，积极生动的课堂）Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．（家长的观点：知识渊博，对学生严格）
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．【高分句型】Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．【高分句型】（我的观点）

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．