Question

假设你是Peter，你的同学Mike经常在教室里随地丢纸片、塑料袋等；他还避开父母和老师抽烟。作为同学， 你将如何劝说他改掉不良的习惯？请你给他写一封信。

要求:1. 用上所有提示，可适当发挥；      2. 语言正确，行文流畅，书写规范；

3．词数：80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出；4．文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。

Dear Mike,

As your classmates and one of your best friends,                                      

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                              

Yours,

Peter

 

Answer 1

【答案】

As your classmates and one of your best friends, I’d like to give you some advice. I find you often drop some paper, plastic bags and other litter in the classroom. These things make the classroom dirty. Don’t you think it is our duty to keep the classroom clean? So could you please not drop litter in the classroom anymore? And another thing is that you often smoke. Smoking is bad for your health. Would you mind stopping smoking? I hope you can get over these bad habits and be a good student.

Yours,

Peter

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信劝说你的同学改掉不良习惯。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一二人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

考点：应用文写作

点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。