Question

请你以心理医生Mr. Green的名义给Tom一些晚上更好休息以及如何放宽心态，积极备战的建议。要求通顺达意。字数在80-100词之间。（15分）

参考词汇: relax; healthy; happy; confident (自信的)……

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. In my opinion, though the exam is very important, ___________________________

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Yours truly,

Mr. Green

 

Answer 1

One possible version

Dear Tom,

I’m glad to hear from you. In my opinion, though the exam is very important, you shouldn’t worry so much. On the opposite, you should try your best to relax.

Here is some advice for you. First you should do some sports. It can not only help you keep healthy but also make you feel confident. Then before you go to bed, why not listen to some light music? I think it is easy for you to go to sleep. Or you can count sheep. It is also a simple way to help you to get to sleep. Besides, it is a good idea to talk with your friends. After all two heads are better than one.

I hope these are useful and you can do well in the exam. Come on ! I believe you and you should believe yourself.

Best wishes!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是医生给出的建议，因此一般现在时和含有情态动词的句子应用的比较多，所以在写作时，要注意时态的变化。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: on the opposite；do some sports；after all；I think it is easy for you to go to sleep；After all two heads are better than one.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。