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5．英语是一门交际的工具．为了提高中学生的英语口语水平，绍兴每年都举行一次中学生英语口语演讲比赛．对于这项活动，不同的学生有不同的看法．请根据下列调查表，描述同学们的想法，并谈谈你的看法．
要求：1．短文须包括表格中所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．词数在100字左右，文章的开头已给出，不记入总词数．

60%同学赞成	40%同学反对	你的看法
1．可以提高英语口语技能	1．平时口语训练少，怕犯错误，被同学们嘲笑	…
2．变得开朗、自信	2．压力过大，对自己没信心
3．交到更多的朋友	3．…

In order to improve students'speaking skills，there is an English speech contest for middle school students in Shaoxing every year．Here is a survey about what students think of the English speech contest．60% of the students like the contest．They think taking part in the contest can improve our speaking skills．Besides，it can make us more outgoing so that we can make more friends，maybe we will become really confident．
However，different students have different ideas.40% of the students have disagreements．They are afraid to make mistakes and they are worried about being laughed at by other students．Another thing that they find difficult is that they are under too much pressure，they are not confident enough．They have so much homework to do that they have little time to practice speaking English．
In my opinion，it's good for us to take part in it．We can not only learn much knowledge but also learn how to face challenges．As the saying goes，nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是描述同学们对中学生英语口语演讲比赛的想法，并谈谈你的看法．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1.60%同学赞成；可以提高英语口语技能，变得开朗、自信，交到更多的朋友
2.40%同学反对；平时口语训练少，怕犯错误，被同学们嘲笑．压力过大，对自己没信心
3．你的看法
常用到的重点短语：
take part in参加
make friends 交朋友
be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事
make mistakes 犯错误
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【高分句型】
1．Besides，it can①make us more outgoing②so that we can make more friends，maybe we will become really confident．
①make sb+adj 让某人怎样
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
2．Another thing①that they find difficult is ②that they are under too much pressure，they are not confident enough．
①that作为引导词的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语，修饰先行词thing．
②that引导的从句做表语，与is构成系表结构．
3．We can①not only learn much knowledge but also learn②how to face challenges．
①not only…but also…不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分．
②疑问词+to do 作为learn的宾语．

解答 In order to improve students'speaking skills，there is an English speech contest for middle school students in Shaoxing every year．Here is a survey about what students think of the English speech contest．60% of the students like the contest．They think taking part in the contest can improve our speaking skills．Besides，it can make us more outgoing so that we can make more friends，maybe we will become really confident．【高分句型】（60%同学赞成）
However，different students have different ideas.40% of the students have disagreements．They are afraid to make mistakes and they are worried about being laughed at by other students．Another thing that they find difficult is that they are under too much pressure，they are not confident enough．【高分句型】They have so much homework to do that they have little time to practice speaking English．（40%同学反对）
In my opinion，it's good for us to take part in it．We can not only learn much knowledge but also learn how to face challenges．【高分句型】As the saying goes，nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it．（我的看法）

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，图表中给出的材料较为丰富，考生在写作时，图表内容必须包括在内．在自己的观点部分，考生需要自己适当的发挥，建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语，出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少．