Question

根据以下两幅图画用英语写一篇日记,记叙今天发生的事,并描述自己的心情和感受。

要求:1.合理发挥想像,使内容充实完整；

2.意思连贯、语言通顺、语法正确；

3. 词数:80字左右。

January 6, 2014, Monday, Sunny

This afternoon,

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Answer 1

【答案】

January 6, 2014, Thursday, Sunny

This afternoon when I was shopping in the supermarket after school I saw a little boy crying right in the middle of the aisle. He cried so loudly that a crowd of people gathered around him. The boy was about three or four years old, with tears on his face. An old lady said, "The boy must be lost. Where is his mother?" I walked to him and gave him a lollipop. "Let’s look for your mother!" I said. Then I took him to the service desk to make an announcement. After ten minutes, his mother arrived. On seeing his mother the boy burst into laughter at once. I am really happy to help the boy although I was blamed by my mother for coming home late. Just like the warm sunshine, helping others makes me feel warm.

【解析】

试题分析：写漫画作文首先要仔细观察画面内容，要观察图画的全貌，要观察背景与人物，要观察图画的细节，还要分清主次。第二，要深入体会图画作者的创作意图，要知道作者在提倡什么，反对什么，颂扬什么讽刺什么，这样在写作时才能把握的准确。第三，要根据观察、体会发挥自己的想象与联想，把作文写充实、写生动。第四，要明确作文写作的目的要求，做到作文与要求相符。这里要看出图画中的小孩在做什么，那个小男孩又做了什么。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: He ut three or four years old, with tears on his face. On seeing his mother the boy burst into laughter at once.等。运用了连词when，so…that等，提醒学生学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更加精彩。

考点：图画作文。