Question

请你为学校杂志写一份广告，内容要点如下：学校乐队（the school band）需要四名新成员，分别要求他们能弹钢琴，弹吉它和敲鼓。你的联系方式，你的号码，87563559 你的电子邮箱（e-mail address） butterfly @ xjschool.com.cn。

要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；2.词数不少于60。

Musicians wanted for the school band

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Musicians wanted for the school band

In order to expand the scale of the school band, we want four new members who can play the piano,the guitar or the drum. Anyone that is good at one of these instruments and interested in joining the band can contact me. My teleohone number is 87563559. You can aslo send me the e-mail. My e-mail address is butterfly @ xjschool.com.cn

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，主要以广告的形式招收乐队成员，主要用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如In order to,be interested in, be good at ,等短语，文中还用到了定语从句 who can play the piano,the guitar or the drum，that is good at one of these instruments and interested in joining the band.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文