Question

【题目】书面表达 满分10分

生活多姿多彩，变化无处不在。请以 Changes in my _________ 如，life, school, family... 为题, 写下你身边的变化，见证发展。

要求：

1. 补全题目，词数不少于60个单词；

2. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。

3. 文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以0分计。

4. 必须写在答题卡上，如在试卷上作答，一律不得分。

Changes in my _________

Answer 1

【答案】

Changes in My Hometown

I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life.

Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings， big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry， we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是篇半命题作文。写作前一定要确定好标题和要写的内容。文中一定要凸显一个关键字changes变化，所以内容会包含现在和过去情况的一个对比。那么在写作中就尤其要注意时态的正确使用。在确定好标题后，再结合情况列出提纲，文章从哪几个方面去进行比较和写作，最后再成文。

写作亮点： 这篇文章结构清晰，先写家乡过去的情况，再写现在的情况，对比鲜明。在内容上，不但写了家乡好的变化，也有不好的变化，内容很充实，而且再后面进行了议论，是一篇优秀的作文。文中用到了很多实用的短语和表达方式，例如：with trees all around树木环绕，用了with短语；take place 发生；with the development of the industry随着工业的发展；more and more serious越来越严重等等。