Question

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据报道，中学生的身体素质有所下降．这一情况已经引起全社会的关注和教育部门的高度重视．下面是某中学关于青少年体育锻炼的标语（slogan）"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away"．请根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，80词左右．文章已给出．
要点：1、锻炼身体的好处：strong，healthy，energetic…
2、锻炼身体的方式：ball games，running，．swimming…
3、请你谈谈对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议．（至少写两点） leave less homework，hold kinds of matches，organize more sports activities…
Health is very important to us teenagers．Either study or work is based on strong body．Doing sports everyday helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．Just as the slogan say，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away．"
There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．
Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈体育锻炼的好处及自己的看法建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1、锻炼身体的好处：
2、锻炼身体的方式：
3、对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议（至少两点）
常用到的重点短语：
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
keep healthy保持健康
such as 例如
take part in 参加
【高分句型】
1．①If we don't take any exercise，we may ②feel tired and get sick easily．
①if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词may，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．
②feel和get都是系动词，和后面的形容词构成系表结构．
2．I hope①teachers will leave us less homework②so that we can have more time③to take part in sports．
①省略了引导词that的宾语从句
②so that引导的目的状语从句．
②动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 Health is very important to us teenagers．Either study or work is based on strong body．Doing sports everyday helps us keep healthy and energetic．If we don't take any exercise，we may feel tired and get sick easily．【高分句型】Just as the slogan say，"Exercise one hour a day，keep illness away．"（锻炼身体的好处）
There are many kinds of sports we can do，such as running，swimming and ball games．（锻炼身体的方式）
Now we students have to do too much homework after school．I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports．【高分句型】I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us．（对学校开展体育锻炼的看法和建议）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．