Question

6．2016年10月，万圣节期间，成都地铁拒绝一群化妆成鬼怪模样的年轻人进入，担心吓到乘客．由此引发了网上关于中国人是否应该过洋节（foreign festival）的讨论．大家各抒己见．请问你对这个问题有什么看法，请写一篇短文，讲述一下你的观点．
提示：支持者：过洋节能够了解西方文化（western culture），开阔眼界，交流看法（exchange ideas）．反对者：要保护中国传统文化（traditional culture），牢记历史，不能崇洋媚外（be crazy about foreign things）．要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，内容连贯；
 2．根据提示内容可以适当发挥；3．词数80词左右；4．文中不得出现真实姓名，校名．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festival or not．昨天，我们就是否该庆祝洋节展开了讨论．
have a discussion讨论；whether…or not是否
【高分句型二】
As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has in fact become a global village．我们都知道，随着科学技术的发展，地球已经变成一个地球村．
with介词短语，意思是"随着…"，表示伴随状态；现在完成时的应用，have/has+过去分词

解答 Nowadays，there appears a Phenomenon that many Chinese become crazy about foreign festivals．（引出话题）Yesterday，we had a discussion on whether we should celebrate foreign festival or not．【高分句型一】Opinions are divided on this issue．Sixty percent of the students think that it is wrong to do so because people will waste a lot of money observing these festivals．Besides，people are likely to forget their own tradition and culture if they focus too much on foreign festivals．（反对方的观点）However，thirty percent of the students argue that it's natural trend to celebrate foreign festivals． As we all know，with the development of science and technology，the earth has in fact become a global village．【高分句型二】Those festivals that were once foreign to us are now familiar to us．（支持方的观点）
Both of them have their own ideas．I think if we can strike a balance between our own festivals and foreign ones，it's not a bad idea to have more festivals to celebrate．（我的观点）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．