Question

11．学校将举办英语写作比赛．请根据所给提示，以"Getting along well with others"为题，写一篇参赛短文．

注意事项：
1．词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2．文中不能出现真实姓名，校名等信息；
3．文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥．
Getting along well with others No one can live without keeping in with others．Therefore，it's important for us to learn how to         

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文．本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题．写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
高分句型：
（1）It's important for us to learn how to get along well with others，对我们来说如何和别人相处的融洽是非常重要的．在这里It's important for sb to do sth，意思是对某某来说做某事是重要的，it作的是形式主语，后面的to引导的不定式作真正的主语，get along well with sb表示与某某相处的非常融洽．
（2）If we can get along well with others，we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything．如果我们能和别人相处得好，我们每天都会玩得很开心，当我们做任何事情的时候都会成功．在这里if引导的是一个条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时，enjoy ourselves 玩的高兴，过得愉快．

解答 Getting along well with others．
No one can live without keeping in with others．Therefore，it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others（高分句型）．（引出话题）We should be kind and friendly enough to others，so we can make more friends．We can share joy and sadness with our friends．If we are free，we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours．At home，we should communicate more with our parents．They are our closest people in the world．At school，we should respect our teachers．（分层说明与朋友，邻居，父母如何相处）They are like both our parents and friends．Getting along well with others is very important．If we can get along well with others，we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything（高分句型）．（总结说明和别人相处的重要性）

点评 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少．如：get on well with others和其他人相处得好；friendly enough 足够友好；communicate with our parents与父母交流．If we can get along well with others，we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything．如果我们能和别人相处得好，我们每天都会玩得很开心，当我们做任何事情的时候都会成功．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．