Question

书面表达（本题满分15分）

我有个朋友叫李丽。请根据以下信息，写一封70字左右的文章，介绍李丽及她的校园生活。

Name	Li Li	Age	12
Live in	Beijing	Looks	short and thin
Hobbies	Dancing, listening to music	Class	Class 2, Grade 7
School	Sunshine Middle School	Good at	Biology
Get up	6:30 a.m.	Get to school	7:50 a.m.
Classes	Have 6 classes a day	get home	5:30 p.m.

要求：

1. 语法正确，语句通顺。

2. 信息全面，书写正确。

I have a friend. Her name is Li Li.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I have a friend. Her name is Li Li. She is 12 years old. She lives in Beijing now. She is short and thin. She likes dancing and listening to music. She studies in Sunshine Middle School and she is in Class 2, Grade 7. She is good at biology. She gets up at 6:30am every morning. and gets to school at 7:50am. She has 6 classes a day. She gets home at 5:30pm.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们介绍自己的好朋友李丽和她的校园生活。题目中的表格中给出了李丽的相关信息，例如她的年龄、外貌、爱好、所在学校以及她的日常生活。我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文中我们介绍的是自己的好朋友，所以整篇短文都应该使用第三人称she来表达，并且应该用一般现在时态，所以这里就需要注意句子中第三人称单数形式的使用，注意动词形式的变化。还要注意语句的表达要合乎英语的表达规范，语法正确。另外写作时还需要注意使用好的句型和短语，使文章意思连贯，语句通顺。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文，短文中作者按照题目的要求介绍了自己的好朋友李丽。首先作者写的是李丽的年龄、外貌和爱好，She is 12 years old. She lives in Beijing now. She likes dancing and listening to music；这里作者使用了句型like doing sth.；接下来写的是她在学校的情况，She studies in Sunshine Middle School and she is in Class 2, Grade 7. She is good at biology.最后写了李丽的日常生活，She gets up at 6:30am every morning. and gets to school at 7:50am. She has 6 classes a day. She gets home at 5:30pm。整篇短文语法正确，使用了正确的人称和时态，特别是注意了第三人称单数的使用。并且尽可能多的使用了好的句型和连词，使文意连贯。

考点：提纲类作文。