Question

5．学会分享很重要．你有哪些东西要分享？可采取哪些方式分享？请根据图示内容，结合自身的一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐述分享的意义．
要求：
1．要点齐全，并适当发挥．
2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出、不记入总词数）．
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学佼名称．
Sharing
It's very important to learn to share with each other．There are many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ．e-mail which are widely used．Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．
Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we're good friends．
In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．．

Answer 1

分析 此篇书面表达的话题是"学会分享"．首先我们根据给出的树形的思维导图确定要写的内容的提纲，包括：分享什么？怎么分享？为什么分享？然后根据每个提纲给出的一些关键词，拓展思维，写出自己的看法．最后，我们还要注意"学会分享"的情感教育，让我们学有所获．

解答 One possible version：
                                                     Sharing
    It's very important to learn to share with each other．There are many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ．e-mail which are widely used．Now I'd like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．
   Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we're good friends．
   In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．

点评 无论是哪一种书面表达形式，考生所写的短文都要紧扣主题、文理通顺、要素完整，语言准确、得当、格式正确、无大、小写和拼写错误，标点符号正确，能达到内容完整的目的．