Question

4．假设你是某学生杂志社的编辑Diana，收到了读者Steve的一封来信，信中倾诉了他目前的烦恼．请根据提示内容，给Steve写一封回信．
提示：

与人交流	课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学交谈
表达善意	主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学
参加活动	积极参加班级活动（如：运动会、歌咏比赛等）

参考词汇：小组讨论 group work表达 express
要求：1．词数：80～100个．
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3．要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥．
Dear Diana，
I just came to a new school．And I can't get on well with my new classmates…What should I do？
Steve
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Dear Steve，
I've learned about your problems．I thinkyou should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them．Being friendly and helpful is also very important．You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．I'm sure you will soon be popular among friends．
Best wishes，
Diana．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇表格类提纲作文．内容是写一封回信，给朋友提怎样和同学相处好的建议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1与人交流：课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；课间和同学交谈
2表达善意：主动问候同学；对同学友好；帮助同学
3．参加活动：积极参加班级活动（如：运动会、歌咏比赛等）
常用到的重点短语：
be active in 积极参与
try to do sth尽力做某事
get on with sb与…相处
forget to do sth忘记去做某事
take part in参加
such as例如
高分句型：
1．I think①you should be active in group work in class and be ②brave enough to express your ideas．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为think的宾语，that省略．
②adj/adv+enough+to do sth足够怎么样去做某事
brave enough to express your ideas足够勇敢去表达自己的观点．（enough修饰形容词）
He didn't run fast enough to catch the train．他跑得不够快，没赶上火车（他跑得不够快以至于没赶上火车）．（enough修饰副词 fast）
2．①If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello ②when you meet them．
①if引导的是条件状语从句，主句是祈使句，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．
②when引导的时间状语从句，意为当…的时候．

解答 Dear Steve，
I've learned about your problems．I think you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas．（高分句型）Try to talk with your classmates at break．If you want to get on well with your classmates，don't forget to say hello when you meet them（高分句型）（与人交流）Being friendly and helpful is also very important．（表达善意）You need to take part in all kinds of class activities，such as sports meetings，football games and singing competitions．（参加活动）I'm sure you ll soon be popular among friends．
Best wishes，
Diana

点评 这是一篇所给材料比较详细的表格类作文，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥．在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性，做到上下文联系紧密、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系