Question

请你设计一下你心目中的理想学校，以便校长对以后的学校改建或重建作参考。

Answer 1

My Ideal School
This is my ideal school. My classroom building is in the middle of the school. The teachers’ offices are on the fourth floor. The dining hall is behind the classroom building. The gym is very large. It is next to the dining hall. In the gym, there is a swimming pool. The science lab is in front of the gym. The library is on the left of the science lab. There are many books in it.

试题分析；这是一篇命题作文，介绍你心目中的理想学校。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构，注意运用所给短语。叙述顺序基本按照时间顺序叙述即可，注意上下文的逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。
点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。