Question

4月是踏青旅游的好时间，上周周末，你和你的父母去了杭州游玩，请你根据所给提示写一篇短文介绍游玩的一些情况。要求语言通顺，意思连贯，必须包括所给内容，可围绕主题适当发挥，词数不得少于70个词。

When	last weekend
Where	Hangzhou
Who	I、my parents
How	two hours , by train , comfortable…
What	visit: Western Lake、Hangzhou Amusement Park (杭州乐园)、Lingyin Temple(灵隐寺)… … eat: delicious food … … go shopping : the biggest shopping centre , buy many things … …
Feeling	very happy ,want to go there next year
… …

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

I went to Hang Zhou with my parents last weekend.We went there by train,because by train was very comfortable.It took us two hours to go there. We visited Western Lake、Hang Zhou Amusement Park、Lingyin Temple and so on. We ate some delicious food .And we went to the biggest shopping centre to buy many things.We felt very happy . So I wanted to go there next year.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般过去时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般过去时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: It took us two hours to go there. we went to the biggest shopping centre to buy many things.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。