Question

【题目】书面表达

根据下表内容，用英语写一篇60词左右的人物介绍。

姓名	王林
年龄	13岁
居住地	江苏南京
长相	短发，个子很高，戴眼镜
品格	友好，乐于助人，学习勤奋
所在学校	阳光中学
爱好	游泳，玩电脑游戏，经常在周末和同学一起踢足球， 梅西(Messi)是他最喜欢的运动员和偶像
理想	当一名足球运动员

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Answer 1

【答案】This is Wang Lin. He is my good friend. He is thirteen, and he comes from Nanjing.

Wang Lin is tall. He has short hair with a pair of glasses. He studies at Sunshine Middle School. He works hard. He is nice and willing to help others.

Wang Lin likes swimming and playing computer games. He also likes football. He often plays football with his classmates at weekends. Mess is his favourite player and hero. He wants to be a football player in the future.

【解析】试题本篇书面表达为人物介绍，结合本题所给的写作信息，介绍“王林”的姓名、年龄、居住地、外貌、品格、爱好等。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中comes from，with a pair of glasses, works hard, be willing to，playing computer games, also, at weekends, in the future等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了并列连词and，使文章增色不少，值得学习。