Question

12．回顾初中三年成长过程，你一定有很多感受，请你从学习，生活，爱好等方面作出自我评价．
提示词：learn，do well in，make friends，hobby，try one's best．所有的提示词必须用上，并适当发挥．
字数：80个字左右．（注意：写作中不能出现真实的姓名和学校等相关信息）
I have studied in my middle school for three years．I really like it．（开篇点题）
I have learned a lot here．I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others．I have many hobbies．I like sports．I often play basketball，football and volleyball with my friends．Football is my favorite．I want to be a football player when I grow up．【高分句型一】Of all my subjects，I do best in English．But my math and physics are a little weak．I will try my best to learn them well．（我的初中生活）
I hope I can study in No.1 High School．【高分句型二】I will do my best to make it come true．（表达期望）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I want to be a football player when I grow up．
句中"when I grow up"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"want to do sth 想做某事"、"grow up 长大"．这句话意为：当我长大，我想成为一名足球运动员．
高分句型二：
I hope I can study in No.1 High School．
句中"I can study in No.1 High School"为宾语从句．这句话意为：我希望我可以去第一高中学习．

解答 I have studied in my middle school for three years．I really like it．（开篇点题）
I have learned a lot here．I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others．I have many hobbies．I like sports．I often play basketball，football and volleyball with my friends．Football is my favorite．I want to be a football player when I grow up．【高分句型一】Of all my subjects，I do best in English．But my math and physics are a little weak．I will try my best to learn them well．（我的初中生活）
I hope I can study in No.1 High School．【高分句型二】I will do my best to make it come true．（表达期望）

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