Question

13．假如你是李梅．你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的E-mail中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事．请你根据下面所给图画，给Tom回复一封E-mail，向他讲述这一经典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．
Sima Guang hit the tank（缸）

要 求：
1．文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；
2．文中不得出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息；
3.100 词左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是给Tom回复一封E-mail，向他讲述司马光砸缸的故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法．注意邮件的格式．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1描述图画：司马光和朋友一起玩捉迷藏，旁边有一口装满水的缸，一个小孩掉进缸里，其他小孩吓坏了，司马光想出主意，捡起石头扔向缸，缸破了，小孩得救了．
2询问对该故事及主人公的看法．
常用到的重点短语：
be interested in 对…感兴趣
fall into 掉入
be full of 充满
pick up 捡起
【高分句型】
1．I'm very happy①that you②are interested in traditional Chinese stories．
①that引导的宾语从句．
②be interested in 对…感兴趣

2①．When the kids were playing，one child accidentally ②fell into the tank．
①when引导的时间状语从句．
②fall into 掉入
3．Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．
so…that…如此…以致于…，that引导的结果状语从句．

解答 Dear Tom，
I'm very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories．【高分句型】Well，let me tell you a famous one with the name"Sima Guang hit the tank"．
Once Sima Guang was playing hide and seek with several children in the backyard．There was a large water tank in the yard．It was full of water．（第一幅图）When the kids were playing，one child accidentally fell into the tank．【高分句型】Other children were so frightened that they started to run，crying for help．【高分句型】（第二幅图）However，Sima Guang was different．He thought it over and then had an idea．He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank．（第三幅图）"Bang!"，the tank broke and the water ran out．The kid was saved．（第四幅图）
Do you like the story？What do you think of Sima Guang？（询问对该故事及主人公的看法．）
I am looking forward to hearing from you．
Li Mei

点评 看图作文的基本步骤：
一、列出要点．明确写作的具体内容，仔细寻找全部要点，做到要点无遗漏．
二、依据内容要点，选择确立可供自己使用的熟悉词汇、短语和句型．做到"不求难，不求异，只求准"．
三、将要点译成基本句子．尽量用熟悉、简单的结构表达，避免因用大量的长句和复合句而造成的语法错误．忌用汉语思维生造句子．
四、按一定的时间、空间及逻辑顺序或情节发展对基本句子进行有序的排列组合．
五、适当增加细节，运用适当的连接过渡词将句子连接成文．
六、细心检查错漏：检查人称和主谓是否一致；检查时态和语态是否正确，检查语句和措词是否恰当；检查拼写和标点是否无误；检查内容要点是否齐全．