Question

在你的业余时间，你有什么特别的爱好？也许体育活动(篮球，乒乓球，游泳等)是你的酷爱；也许你有艺术天赋，唱歌、跳舞、音乐、绘画是你的专长；也许收集是你生活中不可缺少的一部分；也许……

请根据以上提示，将你的爱好和与之相关的趣事写信给你的笔友。

要求：1. 选择你的一个爱好来详写； 2. 语句通顺，意思明确； 3. 60-80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数.

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.

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Yours,

Kangkang

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.

I like playing basketball very much.I have played basketball when I was 10 years old.However I have never given up playing basketball from then on.I make full use of my free time to play basketball,do more exercises about runing ,jumping,passing the ball.And I am working for our shool's basketball team.I think basketball not only can harden my body ,but also can fillfull of my free time.I will keep on my hobby of basketball.I will never give up it.

Yours,

Kangkang

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文作者写自己的个人爱好，如何提高自己打篮球的水平，以及这一爱好的好处，全文主要用一般现在时态。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如given up,from then on,make full use of ,working for,not onl...but also,keep on等短语，文中还用到了时间状语从句 when I was 10 years old.宾语从句 basketball not only can harden my body ,but also can fillfull of my free time.文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

考点：提纲作文