Question

书面表达 （10分）

为配合我区开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well?”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的参赛短文。

提示：1. 衣着整洁；

2. 说“请、对不起、谢谢”，不说脏话；

3. 友善待人，乐于助人，如……

4. 保持城市干净，如……

5. 遵守交通规则，如……

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

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If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and greener.

Answer 1

How to Behave Well?

In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.

It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. We should be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies.

We should try our best to keep our city clean. For example, we shouldn’t throw litter everywhere. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not pick flowers in the park.

If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and greener.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情

况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，能用简短的词汇表达出提纲的内容，并且进行了适当的处理，准确的添加自己的观点，同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑

性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。