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请以1 want to be..为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点:1.你的理想是什么?
2.你将如何实现你I向理想?
要求:1.短文应包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺、意思连贯;
3.文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名

I want to be an English teacher
I want to be an English teacher when I grow up. Firstly, I like English. I want to use it often in my daily life. Secondly, I like working with students, and enjoy being asked questions and answering them. Thirdly, I’m good at English. So I can teach my students the right way to learn English.
Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests, and try to practice speaking English as much as possible. Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day.

试题分析:这是一篇命题作文,要求我们以I want to  be…为题写一写自己毕业以后的理想。作文应该有三个要点,一是点明自己的理想是什么;二要陈述自己有这个梦想的原因;三是如何来实现自己的这个理想。在分析要点时,我们要注意将自己有这个理想的原因说清楚,这应该是作文中重要的一部分,并且这一部分是需要自己发挥想象力,来补充说明的。这一话题也是学生们较为熟悉的,他们应该是有话可说,并且相关的句型也较熟悉。通过审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态,第一人称,因此句中动词的形式很简单,不会出现什么错误。但是我们要注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表达流畅,有节奏感。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文。作者告诉了我们自己长大后的理想,并且从三个方面表述了自己有这个梦想的原因,最后写了自己想怎样来实现自己的梦想,内容很完整,结构也很合理。短文中,作者发挥了自己的英语才能,使这篇短文的内容很丰富。如在提到自己为什么想要成为一名英语老师的时候,他给了我们三个理由。这三个理由都很贴合文意,很合理。他使用了表示顺序的词,使这一部分很有条理。短文中用到的好的句型有I like working with students, and enjoy being asked questions and answering them.、So I can teach my students the right way to learn English.、Now what I should do is to study hard and get high marks in English tests、Only in this way can I realize my dream of being an English teacher one day. 这些动名词、主语从句、动词不定式和倒装的使用,使文章表达很流畅。
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