Question

8．假如你叫李华，市第三中学初三的学生．星期天你和班里的同学去康乐敬老院（old folk's home） 参加了社区活动．请根据下面的图画的提示词语，用英语写一篇100词左右的日记．可合理想象，适当发挥．句首已给出，不计入总词数．
（一）审题
本篇作文考查的为记叙文．要求利用所给的信息列举在星期天去往敬老院的经过．然后写出你个人的观点．
（二）列举写作要点．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．内容为利用所给的信息列举在星期天去往敬老院的经过．然后写出你个人的观点．时态为一般过去时．人称为第一人称．写作要点包括：1．乘坐校车去往敬老院．老人见到我们的心情．2．在敬老院，我们为老人做的事情．3．活动之后的感受．常用到的重点句型和短语：be pleased to do，sweep the floor，it's our duty to do sth．等．

解答 Sunday
Fine
Today，we took the school bus to Kang Le old folk's home．The old people greeted us warmly and they were very pleased to see us．We helped them do a lot of things in the old folk's home．We swept the floor for them，we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk．Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves that day．Finally，we had lunch together with the old people and the dishes were very delicious．
As the students in Grade Nine in No.3 Middle School，we like the activity very much．And I think it's our duty to help the old people，do you think so？

点评 这是一篇提纲类作文．此篇文章需要学生的适当自我发挥，因此考生在认真审题的前提下根据提纲规定的方向和范围构思和展开材料是至关重要的．作文中所用词汇比较常见，考生可在日常生活中多多识记常用到的重点短语和句型，在动手写作之前可先找出要点，列出写作的提纲，在提纲材料的基础上，合理巧妙地构思全文，充分表现材料的主题．