Question

助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德。你在生活或学习中是否帮助过别人？是否接受过别人的帮助呢？学校英文广播站正在开展以“助人为乐”为话题的征文活动。请你结合自己的亲身经历向广播站投稿，简述你是如何帮助他人的，并谈谈你对助人为乐的感受和你今后在这方面的打算。

要求：1、语言通顺、连贯，符合逻辑；2、词数：80~100.

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Answer 1

One possible version:

I enjoy helping others both in school and out of school. In school, I get on well with my classmates and often help them with their lessons. On my way home, I always give my seat to old people or women with babies on the bus. I think helping others can not only make us happy, but also help us get more experience in life. I will go on doing this as much as possible and work hard at my lessons in order to help others better in the future.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是结合自己的在日常生活中的做法和今后的打算，因此一般现在时和一般将来时应用的比较多，所以在写作时，要注意时态的变化。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: both in school and out of school；get on well with；I think helping others can not only make us happy, but also help us get more experience in life。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。