Question

10．为配合创建"绿色健康校园"工作，学生会发起以"Make Our School Greener"为主题的英语征文比赛．请根据以下信息写一篇短文，短文题目和开头已给出．
要点提示：
1．爱护校园内的花草树木
2．保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物
3．节约用水、坚持锻炼…
注意：
1．词数80左右；开头已给出‘不计入总字数．
2．结合以上要点，可围绕主题适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称．
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we shoulddo many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是为配合你校创建"绿色健康学校"工作的全面展开，校学生会发起以"Make Our School Greener"为主题的英语征文比赛．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一，二人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）爱护校园内的花草树木（2）保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物（3）节约用水，坚持锻炼
常用到的重点短语：
keep sth+adj 保持某物怎么样的
throw away 乱扔
meanwhile 同时
try to do sth 尽力做某事
forget to do sth 忘记去做某事
turn off 关掉
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
be polite to sb 对某人礼貌
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，we should②keep the school environment neat and clean，③thus ④throwing away the waste ⑤should be forbidden．
①besides 另外
②keep sth+adj 保持某物怎么样的
③thus 因此，表结果
④throw away 乱扔．动名词短语做主语．
⑤情态动词的被动语态：情态动词+be+过去分词．
2．①Meanwhile，②try to save water③if necessary and never ④forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or ⑤when the classroom is empty．
①meanwhile 同时
②try to do sth 尽力做某事
③if necessary是省略句，完整表达是if it is necessary．
④forget to do sth 忘记去做某事  turn off 关掉
⑤when引导的时间状语从句．
3．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．
if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．

解答 Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we  should do many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．（爱护校园内的花草树木）Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．【高分句型】（保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物）Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．【高分句型】（节约用水，离开教室前记得关灯）
What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．（坚持锻炼，增强体质）We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．（礼貌待人，同学间相处融洽）
In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．【高分句型】（总结）

点评 本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，写作时要注意文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点，同时还要注意句式的正确运用，例如祈使句和情态动词就是本篇作文的关键．写作时，要注意句式的变化使用．