Question

书面表达（满分15分）

假设你是Andrew，你的好友Nick最近在微博上说学习压力特大，很担心即将到来的考试。请你回复他的微博，给他一些建议。提示如下：

1、不要过分忧虑，静下心来；

2、做好学习计划，认真完成每项任务；

3、多跟父母交流，得到理解；

4、保持自信，相信付出就会有收获。

要求：

1、要点完整、层次清晰；

2、语法正确、上下文连贯。可适当补充。

3、词数80个左右，开头已给，不计入总词数。

Dear Nick,

As for your problem, I want to share my opinions with you.

 

 

 

Best wishes!

Yours,

Andrew

 

Answer 1

Dear Nick,

As for your problem, I want to share my opinions with you.

Many students of our age have great stress too. So there is no need to be too nervous about coming exams. You should clam yourself down. I think it’s a good way to relax yourself by taking a walk after supper every day or doing some sports. Then, you should make a plan for your study because you should know what to do at any time. You will make sure you complete each task on time. Besides that, communication with your parents is also important. You can make your parents understand you better. Last but not least, keeping confident about yourself will bring in good results.

I hope my advice will be worth taking.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Andrew

【解析】

试题分析：这是小作者给自己的好朋友Nick写的一封信，信中给他一些学习建议，让其减轻学习压力。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如So there is no need to be too nervous about coming exams. I think it’s a good way to relax yourself by taking a walk after supper every day or doing some sports. Then, you should make a plan for your study because you should know what to do at any time.等宾语从句。

考点：提纲类作文。