Question

初二年级(1)班的学生去郊外远足，在回家的路上，李明在树下发现了一只小鸟，它的翅膀(wing)有点问题，不能飞了。李明把它带回家，细心照顾它。现在小鸟好多了，小华打算让它飞回蓝天，因为蓝天才是它真正的家。

The students of Class 1, Grade 2 went hiking for a field trip.

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Answer 1

On the way home, Li Ming found a little bird under a tree. There was something wrong with its wing. / Something was wrong with its wing. It couldn't fly. Li Ming brought it home and took good care of it

/looked after it well. Now the bird is better. Li Ming is going to let it fly back to the blue sky because the blue sky is the bird's real home.

【解析】此题描述了李明的一次特殊经历，遇到一只受伤的小鸟，经过自己的细心照料又把小鸟放飞蓝天的过程。此文要用到现在时态和过去时态，要注意时态的正确运用，还要注意语句的正确表达，多用些高级词汇以增强文章的文采。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如Li Ming brought it home and took good care of it

/looked after it well. Li Ming is going to let it fly back to the blue sky because the blue sky is the bird's real home.等。

考点：提纲类作文。