Question

【题目】Writing（作文）

Write at least 60 words on the topic"The beauty in my life"（以"我生活中的美"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

生活中的美无处不在，如在学校活动中、与家人共处时、与朋友欢聚时、与动物相处时……，请选择一个方面，结合发生在你自己身上的一次经历，来写一写你发现的家人或师生间的亲情之美，朋友或同学间的友谊之美，人与动物间的和谐之美……，并说说理由．

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）

Answer 1

【答案】The world is full of love everywhere.My class life is full of happiness．（要点一，班级生活如何）

During the three years' school life,I've got so many things from my class life.Friendship is

the most important and precious thing that I get．（高分句型一）（要点二，最大的收获）

I never feel lonely because I have my lovely friends.Once I failed,my friends supported me

and gave me courage to move on.When I was ill,my friends helped me and looked after me

well.When I succeeded,my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness.（要点三，经历）Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life.As the old saying

goes,"A friend in need is a friend indeed."I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class

life.（高分句型二）In the last three months,I want to try my best to help my friends and make

some wonderful memories.（要点四，做些什么）I expect to maintain the friendship between

my classmates and me.I believe our friendship will last forever.（高分句型三）

【解析】

题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，围绕“我生活中的美”完成本篇文章，本篇文章可以使用一般过去时，讲述自己生活中的美。写作时，注意时态的变化。