Question

【题目】书面表达

老师让同学们讨论网上购物（Internet shopping）的利（advantages）与弊（disadvantages）。根据下列信息，请你代表你们组做个发言。

好处：方便的（convenient）；24小时营业，不用排队（wait in line）

不足：看不见物品，不能享受和朋友们一起购物的乐趣……

要求：1. 语言流畅，规范；

2. 包含提示内容，并作适当发挥；

3. 80个左右的单词。

Answer 1

【答案】

Internet shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a lot of advantages. The most important one is convenient. You can shop whenever you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day, and you do not have to queue with others. Secondly it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet and it is also easy to find what you are looking for.

There are some disadvantages too. You can not see the products or check their quality. Besides you can not enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给信息，写一篇关于英语小短文。我网上购物（Internet shopping）的利（advantages）与弊（disadvantages）。我们应运用正确的熟悉的英语句子将下面的汉语提示的这些内容尽量表达出来。可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。使用提示的单词或短语convenient，wait in line。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的汉语提示，介绍了网购的利（The most important one is convenient. You can shop whenever you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day.）与弊(You can not see the products or check their quality. Besides you can not enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.) 。没有语法和单词拼写上的错误. 短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，语言简洁，口语化。