Question

10．根据下面要求写短文：目前，我们的周围环境遭到严重破坏，污染随处可见．保护环境人人有责．我校将举行以"How to Protect Our Environment"为题进行一场演讲比赛．
要求：1．列举2-3个有关环境污染的现象，如：看不到蓝色的天空，看不到河里的鱼，喝不到干净水等．=2．提出2-3个建议保护环境，如：步行或骑自行车上学，不随处扔垃圾，不得往河里倾倒废水，多种树等．3．可适当发挥．4．词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数．提示词：blue，fish，water，go to school，throw，pour，plant trees…

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
Our environment is becoming worse and worse day by day．我们的环境日益恶化．more and more 越来越…．
 高分句型二 
If everyone makes contribution to the environment，it will get cleaner and tidier soon．如果人人都为保护环境做出贡献，它会很快变得整洁干净．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．

解答 How to Protect Our Environment
Good morning，everyone!Our environment is becoming worse and worse day by day【高分句型一，注意more and more的使用】．Now we can't see blue sky in the cities in the daytime．There is no fish in the dirty rivers or lakes．Even worse，a lot of people can't drink clean water【要点一，列举2-3个有关环境污染的现象】．It's time for us to do something to protect the environment．As a student，we should ride a bike or walk to school every day．We shouldn't pour waste water into rivers．And don't throw rubbish here and there．If everyone makes contribution to the environment，it will get cleaner and tidier soon【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．【要点二，提出2-3个建议保护环境】
That's all．Thank you．

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．