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16.在即将告别母校的时刻,你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情.请根据下面表格所列要点,以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题,用英语写出一篇短文,放在你的QQ空间,供大家访读.



对象存栏记忆未来与祝福
母校美丽校园,快乐家园越来越好
老师教授知识,给予帮助铭记在心
职员关心照料,抚育成长永远开心
同学相处和睦,情同兄弟姊妹保持联系
注意:1词数:80词左右;
2短文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名;
3短文的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计人总词数).
参考词汇:知识 knowledge; 职员 staff members; 永远 always/forever

The last moment held on to
How time flies!We're just leaving you-our lovely junior high school.I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks,dear junior school.You're abeautiful and happy home for us all.I hope you'll be better and better.Thanks,dear teachers.You're taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in allways.I'll remember you forever.Thanks,our staff members.You've taken goodcare of us and helped us grow up.I hope you are happy all the time.Thanks,dear classmates.You've got on well with me just like sisters and brothers.Let's always keep in touch.
Thanks,all my loved ones.All the best to you!Goodbye!

分析 这是一篇图表作文.内容是以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之.时态主要为一般将来时和现在完成时.人称主要为第二人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1母校--美丽校园,快乐家园--越来越好
2老师--教授知识,给予帮助--铭记在心
3职员--关心照料,抚育成长--永远开心
4同学--相处和睦,情同兄弟姊妹--保持联系

常用到的重点短语:
比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
take care of 照顾
all the time 一直
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
grow up 长大
get on with sb 与某人相处
keep in touch 保持联系

高分句型:
1.I hope ①you'll be ②better and better.
①省略了that的宾语从句,作为hope的宾语.
②比较级+and+比较级 越来越…
2.You've ①taken good care of us and ②helped us③grow up.
①take care of sb 照顾某人
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③grow up 长大

解答 The last moment held on to
 How time flies!We're just leaving you-our lovely junior high school.I have so many words from my heart to say
    Thanks,dear junior school.You're a beautiful and happy home for us all.I hope you'll be better and better.(母校--美丽校园,快乐家园--越来越好)【高分句型】Thanks,dear teachers.You're taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways.I'll remember you forever.(老师--教授知识,给予帮助--铭记在心)Thanks,our staff members.You've taken good care of us and helped us grow up.【高分句型】I hope you are happy all the time.(职员--关心照料,抚育成长--永远开心)Thanks,dear classmates.You've got on well with me just like sisters and brothers.Let's always keep in touch.(同学--相处和睦,情同兄弟姊妹--保持联系)
   Thanks,all my loved ones.All the best to you!Goodbye!

点评 本题是一篇图表作文,图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式,比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了,写作时也容易区分表达,本题在写作时,要特别注意几种情况的描述,不能逐句翻译,同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思,恰当使用逻辑词语,让文章显得有条理,不杂乱.

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