Question

【题目】假设你是Alice在Teenager Hotline 做兼职工作，主要接通一些中学打来的求助电话，并根据他们的问题提供建议。下面是你的一些电话记录，请根据以下问题给Jim写一封回信并提出建议。

I am getting fatter and fatter.My classmates are always laughing at me.

My father always smokes at home.

My best friend forget my birthday.

My father’s birthday is coming. I don’t know what to buy.

注意事项：1.尝试用不同的句型提出建议，避免从头到尾用一个句型。

2.所提建议一定要有积极意义并符合实际。

3.不少于80字。开头已给出。

Dear Jim,

I’v e known your problems.

Yours

Alice

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Friends,

I've known your problems. Here is some advice that may help you. First, if you are getting fatter and fatter, I think the best way is exercising more every day. Don't eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. You must be very upset when your classmates are laughing at you. Don't mind it! Everybody has strength and weakness.

Everybody knows that smoking is bad for health. If your father smokes at home, you should have a talk with him. Try to help him give up the habit. If it is too difficult for him to give up the habit, you should ask him to smoke outside instead of at home.
As for your father's birthday party, what about holding a surprise party for him? Write some wishes on paper. Then make some paper planes. Throw the paper planes when he comes into room!

Yours,

Alice

【解析】

试题分析：常用的提建议句式：1. You should (do) ... 2.Maybe you could (do) ...3.Why not (do) ...?4. Why don't you (do) ...” 5.What about (doing) ...?6. How about (doing) ...?7.Would you mind (doing) ...? 8.You had better (do) ...9.If you ..., you'll (do) ...在写作时要注意：1.写有关提建议的话题时，要尝试用不同的句型，避免从头到尾只用一个句型。2.每个句型后面的固定接法一定要注意，不要用错。3.所提建议一定要有积极意义并符合实际。

写作亮点：该文用了一些短语和句式，如：if you are getting fatter and fatter, I think the best way is exercising more every day. Everybody knows that smoking is bad for health. If your father smokes at home, you should have a talk with him. Try to help him give up the habit. If it is too difficult for him to give up the habit, you should ask him to smoke outside instead ofspan> at home. 语句通顺，段落清晰。所用句式灵活多变。