Question

2．Recently there has been a discussion about the topic"Water Is Precious"in your class．
Please write at Host 60words about the topic"Water Is Precious"to express your point of
view，（请以"水是珍贵的"写一篇至少60词的作文，标点符号不占格）
（你的作文内容须包含以下几点）
1）Why is water very important in our life？
2）What are the causes of the water shortage？
3）How can we protect our precious water resources？
As we all know，water is one of the most important resources in our life because we not only drink and wash with it，but use it in agricultural and industrial production as well．However，despite large amounts of water on the earth，only less than 3% can be used by humans，which is not enough for everyone at all．So we must save it．First of all，use water twice or more．For example，we can use water after cleaning the rice to water the plants．It includes a lot of nutrition for them．Secondly，we should turn off the tap when we don't use it．Last but not least，we shouldn't pour the sewage into the lake，for it may dirty the lake．In all，let's take actions to protect precious water!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"Water Is Precious"为主题谈谈水的重要性和怎样保护水资源．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1为什么水在我们生活中很重要？
2引起水资源缺少的原因？
3我们怎样能保护我们珍贵的水资源？

常用到的重点短语：
not only，but…as well 不仅…而且…
less than 少于
not…at all 一点也不
turn off 关掉
last but not least最后也是最重要的
in all 总之
【高分句型】
1．①However，②despite large amounts of water on the earth，only③less than 3% ④can be used by humans，⑤which is⑥not enough for everyone at all
①however表转折，然而．
②despite介词，尽管．
③less than 少于
④情态动词的被动语态，主语是water是动词use的承受者，故用被动语态，突出主语．
⑤which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的整个句子．
⑥not…at all 一点也不
2．①Last but not least，we shouldn't②pour the sewage into the lake，③for it may④dirty the lake．
①last but not least最后也是最重要的
②pour…into把…倒入…
③for表示因为，引导原因状语从句．
④dirty作为动词，表示把…弄脏

解答 As we all know，water is one of the most important resources in our life because we not only drink and wash with it，but use it in agricultural and industrial production as well（为什么水在我们生活中很重要）．However，despite large amounts of water on the earth，only less than 3% can be used by humans，which is not enough for everyone at all．（引起水资源缺少的原因？）【高分句型】So we must save it．First of all，use water twice or more．For example，we can use water after cleaning the rice to water the plants．It includes a lot of nutrition for them．Secondly，we should turn off the tap when we don't use it．Last but not least，we shouldn't pour the sewage into the lake，for it may dirty the lake．【高分句型】（怎样能保护我们珍贵的水资源）In all，let's take actions to protect precious water!

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．