Question

随着社会的发展，网上购物已经成为一种新型的购物方式。某英文报以“shopping on line”为话题进行征文。请你根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊并发表你自己的看法。
要求：1．语句流畅，书写规范。
2．包含提示内容，并可适当发挥。
3．词数不少于80个词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Advantages	1．方便的（convenient） 2．24小时营业 3．不用排队
Disadvantages	1．看不见物品，容易受到欺骗（be cheated） 2．不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣
Your opinion	……

Shopping on line is quite popular in our daily life now. ______________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. There are some advantages, especially for busy people. If you shop online, you needn't wait in line. It opens 24 hours, which is very convenient for you. However, it also has some disadvantages. Because you can't see the real things you want to buy, you are easily cheated. What's more, you can't enjoy shopping time in shopping malls with your friends.
In my opinion, everything has two sides. Whether shopping online depends on your time. If you have time, it's better for you to go to streets to do some shopping because you can see and touch the real things. If you are too busy, it's a good idea to shop online, but you can choose to pay after you get what you want to buy.

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍网上购物的利与弊，对于所给提示，要好好组织语言材料，不要有畏难心理，最后不要忘了发表自己的看法。
【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅网络购物的利与弊是注意避免句式重复，而且使用了大量的的短语及定语从句，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如，wait in line. enjoy shopping time in shopping malls with your friends everything has two sides Because you can't see the real things you want to buy,等，What's more等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。