Question

 九年级的学生面临中考，你的理想学校是哪里，为什么要选择这个学校，说出你的理由。你应该怎样利用这段时间来复习各门功课，调整好状态，充分应战。（提示：你选择的学校的优势。你在学习上的时间安排，针对自己不足的科目采取的措施等等）。字数不少于80个字。
                                                                            
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

This is the last year of my junior high school and I am facing a big exam. After graduating from my school, I want to join the NO.1 Middle School to study, which is the best high school in my city. I hear that there are many excellent teachers in that school and the teaching grade is very good there. I think I can study well there. What’s more, NO.1 Middle School is not far from my home. During the last few months, I will make a good plan to study for the final exam, especially English. Although I have a little difficulty in learning English, I will work harder to improve it. And I will practice more to improve my listening ability. I hope I can realize my dream.

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以一个初三学生的身份对自己即将毕业，面临中考这一问题来写一篇作文。该题目有点半开放性，材料中给的范围很宽泛。但是我们还是得要注意它给出的提示，因为它给我们规定了书写内容。包括，毕业后选择哪所学校，这所学校的优势在哪里；你学习上的时间如何安排；针对弱势科目采取什么措施等。这些都属于开放性的，同学们要展开想象力，将以上内容用正确的英语表达出来。同时还要注意行文的连贯，表达的流畅。
【亮点说明】这篇范文书写内容完整，层次分明，是一篇不错的学生作文。首先作者对自己目前面临的情势做了分析，即将毕业，而且还要参加中考。然后作者写了自己想去的学校，并写出了这所学校的两个优势。接下来作者写了自己最后这段时间的安排，以及针对自己不足的科目，如英语，将会采取什么措施来提高。最后作者表达了自己的愿望。写作时注意了使用句型或短语，以使文章表达流畅，有节奏，如After graduating from my school, I want to join、I hear that there are many excellent teachers in that school and the teaching grade is very good there、Although I have a little difficulty in learning English, I will work harder to improve it等。