Question

据报道，有位贫穷的老奶奶，这些年来得到许多好心人的帮助。她把每一笔捐赠都已记录了下来，为的是让孙女学会感恩。
请你写一篇发言稿，要点如下：
简述以上事件；
你的感想：感恩对每一个人都很重要；感谢父母的照顾，感谢老师的教育，感谢同学的帮助；
号召同学们做些感恩的事（列举2个事例）
注意：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 演讲稿应包括上面所有要点，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右（文章开头和结尾已给，不计入总词数）；
4. 短文中不得出现真实的人名，校名等相关信息。
Hello, everyone!
I’m here today to talk about being grateful to others. It is reported that ___________________
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In a word, we should do what we can to express our thanks.
That’s all, thank you.

Answer 1

Hello,everyone!
I’m here today to talk about being grateful to others. It’s reported that a poor grandma/ old woman has got/received a lot of help from others. She has written down every donation to let her granddaughter learn to be grateful/so that her granddaughter will learn to be grateful .
I think it is important for everyone to be grateful /Being grateful is very important to everyone. For example, we should thank our parents for caring for/taking care of/ looking after us in daily life, we are supposed to be thankful to our teachers for educating us. We ought to be grateful to our classmates for their help.
So why don’t we do something for them? We can help mother do some housework such as doing some cleaning ,washing dishes and doing some cooking. We can send cards or flowers to our teachers on /for Teachers’ Day/ We should often come back to visit our teachers after we graduate.
In a word, we should do what we can to express our thanks to people who help or support us.
That’s all, thank you.

试题分析：本题需要包括三个方面：一是叙述报道内容；二是论述感恩的重要性，并举例；三是为什么要感恩，并举例。一定要包括题目提示的要点。文章的人称可以用I和we，而时态除了叙事外，尽量用现在时，也可以用情态动词。表达一定要符合英语的习惯，注意连词的运用。
点评：本题是夹叙夹议类的书面表达，书写起来对时态和人称不好把握，需要认真考量；另外书写时，注意表达的层次性，不能语无伦次。