Question

5．随着社会的发展，网上购物成为一种新型的购物方式．请根据下表提示，谈谈网上购物的利与弊．
要求：1．语句流畅，书写规范．2．包含提示内容，并可适当发挥．3．词数80左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数．4．文中不能出现人名、地名等真实信息．

Advantages	Disadvantages
方便（convenient）；24小时营业； 不用排队	看不见物品；容易受到欺骗（be cheated）； 不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣

Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now．It is a new way of shopping．Many things are offered and wait for your choosing．Convenience is the most important advantage．You can buy anything as you like．You don't have to queue with other shoppers．
Meanwhile，it is often open for 24 hours a day．However，there are many disadvantages about shopping online．You can't actually see the real products．So you may be cheated easily．Also，many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping．
In conclusion，we should make proper use of the internet shopping．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈网上购物的利与弊．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第二，三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1优点：方便（convenient）；24小时营业；不用排队
2缺点：看不见物品；容易受到欺骗（be cheated）；不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣
常用到的重点短语：
wait for 等候
have to 不得不
get along with sb 与某人相处
in conclusion 总之
make use of 使用
【高分句型】
1．You can buy anything as you like．
as you like．as作为关系词的定语从句，修饰先行词anything．
2．So you may be cheated easily．
情态动词的被动语态：情态动词+be+过去分词．
3．①In conclusion，we should②make proper use of the internet shopping．
①in conclusion 总之
②make proper use of 合理使用

解答 Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now．It is a new way of shopping．（总述）
Many things are offered and wait for your choosing．Convenience is the most important advantage（方便）．You can buy anything as you like．【高分句型】You don't have to queue with other shoppers．（不用排队）Meanwhile，it is often open for 24 hours a day．（24小时营业）（优点）
However，there are many disadvantages about shopping online．You can't actually see the real products．（看不见物品）So you may be cheated easily．【高分句型】（容易受到欺骗）Also，many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping．（不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣）（缺点）
In conclusion，we should make proper use of the internet shopping．【高分句型】（我的观点）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，要点已经通过一个表格形式给出．动笔之前要认真阅读材料，不能遗漏要点．给出的材料较为简略，可以适当发挥．可以适当使用两介词使语意通顺，句子连贯，短文最后可以发表一点钟自己的看法．这是一篇说明性的文章，写作时态主要就是一般现在时态，注意人称和数的常见问题，写好后多读几遍适当修改．