Question

假设你是Lin Tao.根据下列表格写一篇介绍自己的短文。(不少于六个句子) （7分）

Name: Lin Tao

Age:13

Class:4

Grade:7

From: China

Tel: (010)79860980

Look: black eyes, a small mouth

                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     
                                                                     

Answer 1

One possible version：
I am Lin Tao. I’m thirteen years old. I come from China. I’m a student. I am in Class 4,Grade 7. I have black eyes and a small mouth. And my telephone number is (010)79860980.

试题分析：本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真审题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求写一篇短文，介绍自己。应该用第一人称做主语。时态是一般现在时。写作前写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。
【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号、大小写运用正确。还恰当地运用了be动词的用法和一些短语，如come from ; telephone number等等。