Question

【题目】写作

以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。

提示：可以谈论一下你心中的英雄是谁(比如亲人、朋友、老师或名人等)；他（她）有什么样的事迹或故事；你喜欢他（她）的原因及应该怎样向他（她）学习。

The Hero in My Heart

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Answer 1

【答案】

Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars. And he is also a hero in my heart.

He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well.

From Jackie Chan, we can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是介绍自己心中的英雄，英雄有什么样的事迹或故事；你喜欢英雄的原因及应该怎样向他（她）学习。根据内容可知句子应该用一般现在时，句子的主语应该是第三人称单数，应该简单地陈述一下他的故事，要注意上下文的衔接。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Jackie Chan is one of the most famous film stars. He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work, he has made over 80 films. As a Chinese, he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well.用了一些连词when引导的时间状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。