Question

14．假如你是Mike，你的朋友Susan近来心情不好，请你给她发一封e-mail，提出合 理性的建议，帮助她调适心情．
字数：80〜100字（首尾句已给出，不记入所要求的总字数）．
供你参考的建议有：
sing，take a walk，do sports，write the diary，watch TV，listen to music，go shopping，go swimming，go outside…
Dear Susan，
When you are not feeling well，the following suggestions may be suitable for you：
1．Go outside!Do something active．For example，take a walk，go swimming，or just lie on the grass and watch clouds pass．
2．Do something you're good at!If you love to sing，then go to turn on some music and sing loudly!
3．Start a diary!Write down your thoughts，dreams，problems or anything you want!
In all，if you want to feel well about yourself，you must believe in yourself！
Best wishes！．
Yours，
Mike．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①When you are not feeling well，the following suggestions may ②be suitable for you．当你感觉不舒服的时候，下面的建议可能适合你．
①when引导的时间状语从句
②be suitable for 对…是适合的
高分句型二：
①In all，②if you want to feel well about yourself，you must believe in yourself！总之，如果你想感觉良好，你必须相信自己！
①in all总之，用于总结
②if引导的条件状语从句，从句用一般现在时表将来

解答 One possible version
Dear Susan，
When you are not feeling well，the following suggestions may be suitable for you：【高分句型一】【给Susan提出合理性的建议】
1．Go outside!Do something active．For example，take a walk，go swimming，or just lie on the grass and watch clouds pass．
2．Do something you're good at!If you love to sing，then go to turn on some music and sing loudly!
3．Start a diary!Write down your thoughts，dreams，problems or anything you want!
In all，if you want to feel well about yourself，you must believe in yourself！【高分句型二】【总结全文】
Best wishes！
Yours，
Mike

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