Question

【题目】下面是某报刊登的一封读者来信，请你以编者Serina 的身份给这位同学回信，并针对她的问题给出合理的建议。80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Serina,

Lisa and I are in the same class and she sits next to me. She is an excellent student and I can learn a lot from her. However, she talks so much that sometimes I can’t pay attention to my studies. I want to change seats with another girl, but I’m afraid it will hurt Lisa’s feelings. What should I do?

Yours,

Winnie

Dear Winnie,

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Yours,

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Winnie,

I’m sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies. However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you. What’s more, she can help you with your studies.

In my opinion, you should get to know her better. Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem. I’m sure she will understand you.

I hope you like my suggestion.

Yours,

Serina

【解析】

写作思路：这是一篇书信作文，首先要开篇点题，陈述写信的缘由。然后针对陈述事实提出自己的建议，最后做出总结，做到首尾呼应。

本篇文章，首先以I’m sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies.开头陈述事实，并且用到that 引导的宾语从句，很自然贴切。However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you.中用However表示转折，接着陈述自己的观点。What’s more,…对自己的观点进一步补充说明，接下来用In my opinion, you should….对接下来需要采取的措施提出自己的建议。Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem用到it is+adj for sb to do sth，句型很棒。最后I hope you like my suggestion写出自己的期望，总结顺畅自然。