Question

【题目】作文（6分）

根据提示，以“爱护动植物”为题，写一篇不少于80个词的短文。

注意：1.内容必须包含提示的所有要点，可适当发挥。

2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

原因	1. 植物和动物对我们很重要。 2. 他们是自然界的重要组成部分。
作用	1. 植物为我们提供新鲜空气。 2. 动物带给我们许多快乐。
措施	1.我们应该阻止人们为了金钱，砍伐森林，捕杀动物。 2.我们应该尽力保护他们。

Answer 1

【答案】

Take Good Care of Animals and Plants!

Plants and animals are very important to us. They are an important part of nature. Plants provide us with fresh air and different kinds of food and fruits. They can also make our environment more beautiful. Animals bring us a lot of pleasure. They can also give us meat. Without them, what will our life be like? We can’t imazine it. We should stop people from cutting down trees and hunting animals for money. We should try our best to protect them.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以“爱护动植物”为题，写一篇短文。写作要点要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如：Plants provide us with fresh air and different kinds of food and fruits. They can also make our environment more beautiful. 问句的应用更增强了说服力，如Without them, what will our life be like?总之，该文表达准确且全面。