Question

【题目】写作

亲爱的同学们，五一节就要来了，你想邀请你的好朋友们去你家所在的小镇玩，请从以下的几个方面介绍一下你的家乡吧!

位 置	离扬州10公里，乘公共汽车大约40分钟的路程。
环 境	安静，能够闻到花香，听见鸟儿歌唱。湖水很清，里面有许多鱼儿。镇中心有一座动物园（描述至少两种动物）。
购物和餐饮	有几个购物中心和餐馆，可品尝著名的地方小吃（local snacks)。
居民	善良，乐于助人（举一事例说明），住在像这样的一个小镇很幸运。

注意：写作必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥。

词数：100词左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

My hometown is_____________________________________________________________________

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I hope you can visit my hometown this May Day Holiday!

Answer 1

【答案】

My hometown is is not far from Yangzhou.It is about 40 minutes from the centre of Yagnzhou by bus. There is less air pollution here.Many trees and flowers can be seen everywhere.The rivers are very clear and there are many kinds of fish in them.There is a beautiful park here. People all like to go there to walk and boat. There are also some supermarkets，you can buy all kinds of things when you stay here. There are many Chinese restaurants and western restaurants. The local snacks taste very nice，too. The transport is very convenient. You can take a bus or a taxi. But it is much better to ride a bike. This is my beautiful hometown.

I hope you can visit my hometown this May Day Holiday!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，主要介绍自己家乡的位置，环境，购物交通和饮食等几个方面。我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知主要用一般现在时态。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。在写作中适当的进行了发挥如：you can buy all kinds of things when you stay here， People all like to go there to walk and boat.等。