Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“My favourite football player”为题介绍你最喜欢的足球运动员。要求包含所列全部要点，可以适当发挥。字数在50词左右。

My favourite football player
Name	Jim Smith	Age	25
Club	Huanghe Football Club	Comes from	England
Lives in	Beijing	Looks	tall and strong
Hobbies	studying Chinese, reading	His dream	play in the next World Cup

My favourite football player

Answer 1

【答案】

Jim Smith is my favourite football player. He is 25 years old. He is a member of Huanghe Football Club. He plays football well. He comes from England, now he lives in Beijing. He looks tall and strong. He likes studying Chinese and reading books. He wants to play in the next World Cup. I hope his dream comes true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用固定短语如come from，come true，，likes doing sth，want to do sth等等，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。