Question

15．当今社会，与人交往越来越成为一种不可或缺的能力，作为中学生，学会如何与人相处
尤为重要．假如上周你们班对"如何与人相处"展开了讨论，请根据以下的讨论结果，以
"How to get on well with others？"为题，写一篇英语短文．

讨论结果	（1）尊重（respect）他人 （2）学会沟通 （3）乐于助人 …
我的建议	…

注意：（1）词数80左右；
（2）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校．
How to get on well with others？
As we all know，students should learn how to get on well with others．But in what ways？First of all，we should respect others．Everyone has their own way to do things，so we should understand each other．Besides，it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．What's more，we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．In my opinion，we should treat others in an honest way．Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇以图表作提纲的作文，要求老师要求学生就"与人相处"的话题展开小组讨论．根据表格中你所在小组的讨论的结果，以"how to get well with others"为题，写一篇英语短文，因此人称应该用第一人称we来写，时态用一般现在时．
写作思路：本文的写作要点主要包括：
一：讨论结果
（1）尊重（respect）他人
（2）学会沟通
（3）乐于助人…
二：我的建议，
重点句型及短语：
 first of all 首先
communicate with sb 与某人交流
what's more 再者
be kind to sb 对某人友好
in one's opinion 依某人看来
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，②it is important for us to ③communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．
①besides 另外
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
③communicate with sb 与某人交流
2．①What's more，we should②be kind to others and③offer necessary help to those④who are in trouble．
①what's more 再者
②be kind to sb 对某人友好
③offer sth to sb 提供某物给某人
④定语从句，修饰先行词those，关系词who做主语．
3．Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy．
only短语放句首，引起主谓倒装．

解答 How to get on well with others？
As we all know，students should learn how to get on well with others．But in what ways？First of all，we should respect others．Everyone has their own way to do things，so we should understand each other．（尊重他人）Besides，it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness．（学会沟通）【高分句型】What's more，we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble．（乐于助人）【高分句型】
In my opinion，we should treat others in an honest way．Only in this way can we get along well with each other and feel happy．【高分句型】（我的建议）

点评 本题是一篇以图表的形式提供提纲的作文，给的线索较为简单，需要我们自己发挥想象，写出合情合理的句子，在写作时还要注意文章的结构，可以用到first of all，besides，what's more 等来连接让文章更有条理．