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14．假设你班为促进学生素质的全面发展，最近以"当班干是否会影响自己的学习？"为题进行了一次讨论．许多同学认为当班干不会影响自己的学习，但也有一些同学认为当班干会影响自己的学习．请你根据以下表格中的内容要点提示，用英语写一篇短文．

乐观者的观点	1．当班干不会影响学习； 2．学习好的关键因素：…（自拟理由） 3．当班干还会有利于你的学习提高：…（自拟理由）
担心者的观点	1．当班干会影响学习； 2．当班干就不会有足够时间学习：…（自拟理由） 3．学习会掉队．
你自己的观点	…（自拟观点和理由）

要求：1．词数100个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．所写内容必须包括表格中的所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息．
（参考词汇：掉队 fall behind，自信心 conference，关系 relationship）
Is it good to be the class leader？
Does being a class leader affect（影响） our studies？Different students have different opinions（观点）．
Some students think being a class leader doesn't influence our studies．If we want to do well in our studies，we must listen to the teacher carefully and do some exercises to practise．And being a class leader doesn't harm either of these．Class leaders are always better at studying than other students．They need to set a good example to others，so they always try their best to make progress in their studies．
However，some others think being a class leader affects our studies．As a class leader，we don't have much time to study．We need to help others to study．And we need to spend a lot of time keeping order．Then there is not much time for ourselves．We will fall behind．
In my opinion，being a class leader at school doesn't influence our studies．It's a good chance to improve ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是说说同学们针对"当班干是否会影响自己的学习？"发表的不同观点，并谈谈自己的观点．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
一、乐观者的观点 
1．当班干不会影响学习；
2．学习好的关键因素：…（自拟理由）
3．当班干还会有利于你的学习提高：…（自拟理由）
二、担心者的观点 
1．当班干会影响学习；
2．当班干就不会有足够时间学习：…（自拟理由）
3．学习会掉队．
三、你自己的观点 …
常用到的重点短语：
do well in 擅长
set an example  树榜样
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
fall behind 落后
【高分句型】
1①．If we②want to do well in our studies，we must listen to the teacher carefully and do some exercises to practise．
①if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词must，从句用一般现在时．
②want to do sth想要做某事；do well in 擅长．

2．They need to①set a good example to others，②so they always③try their best to make progress in their studies．
①set a good example  树立一个好榜样
②so表示所以．
③try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事；make progress 取得进步

3．①However，some others think②③being a class leader affects our studies．
 ①however 然而，表转折．
②think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
③动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数．

解答 Is it good to be the class leader？
Does being a class leader affect（影响） our studies？Different students have different opinions（观点）．
Some students think being a class leader doesn't influence our studies．（当班干不会影响学习）If we want to do well in our studies，we must listen to the teacher carefully and do some exercises to practise．【高分句型】（学习好的关键因素）And being a class leader doesn't harm either of these．Class leaders are always better at studying than other students．They need to set a good example to others，so they always try their best to make progress in their studies．【高分句型】（当班干还会有利于你的学习提高及理由）
However，some others think being a class leader affects our studies．【高分句型】（当班干会影响学习）As a class leader，we don't have much time to study．We need to help others to study．And we need to spend a lot of time keeping order．Then there is not much time for ourselves．（当班干就不会有足够时间学习及原因）We will fall behind．（学习会掉队）
In my opinion，being a class leader at school doesn't influence our studies．It's a good chance to improve ourselves．（我的观点）

点评 这是一篇议论文，要求我们对最近班里同学们的一次讨论结果进行描述．这次讨论是关于当班干是否会影响自己的学习的，不同的学生有自己不同的看法，我们需要按照表格中的提纲，用正确的英语把这个讨论结果表达出来．从表格中的提纲来看，我们的这篇作文应主要有三部分的内容，一是乐观的同学们的观点以及他们的理由；二是担心者的同学们的观点和他们的理由；最后是自己的观点，这部分内容是开放的，我们可以自由发挥．因此，写作时我们可以根据这三部分内容划分出层次．同时注意语句的连贯和表达的准确和流畅．